About This Service

Why Leave It to Chance?

Well-written, clear, and compelling application essays can be the decisive factor between receiving an offer of admission or a rejection.

Applying to Law, Medical, or Business School?

The admissions landscape is intensely competitive, particularly for applicants targeting top-tier programs. The majority of your competitors will possess impressive undergraduate grades, standardized test scores, and professional experience. While admissions committees can evaluate your quantitative metrics, they are equally interested in understanding your thought processes and motivations. This is where your personal essays become critical, offering you a final opportunity to distinguish yourself.

As a professional admissions essay consultant, I specialize in helping you build the most persuasive case for your application. I work with you to develop clear, concise, and powerful essays that effectively showcase your unique strengths and significantly improve your likelihood of success. My assistance includes:

• Editing your essays to ensure they directly and succinctly address the prompts.
• Improving the logical flow and structure of your content.
• Strategically minimizing the focus on any potential weaknesses in your background.
• Correcting all errors in punctuation and grammar.
• Providing a guarantee that all writing and editing is performed by me personally, without the use of AI text generation tools.

For further details, please call me at 510-601-9554.

Complimentary Sample Edit

Email me one of your original drafts as a file attachment. If you have utilized an AI tool like ChatGPT, you must send your initial, pre-AI version; otherwise, I cannot ensure the essay will avoid being flagged as AI-generated. I will edit a short section free of charge to illustrate the quality and nature of my work. I advise you to request a similar sample from any other editors you are considering, as this is the most reliable method to verify their claimed expertise and confirm they are not solely reliant on AI.

Targeting a Top-Ten Program?

I have successfully guided hundreds of applicants into prestigious programs both in the United States and internationally, as well as into many excellent programs outside the very top tier.

Assistance with Other Admissions Essays

Yes, I can help improve your prospects for admission to any graduate or undergraduate program. I possess the necessary expertise to develop strong personal statements and statements of purpose for any field of study, thereby greatly enhancing your chance of acceptance. Submit your draft to receive a free, no-obligation sample edit.

Guaranteed Confidentiality

My service is completely confidential. I do not employ staff or subcontractors. I am the only person who will review and work on your essays.

Significantly Enhance Your Prospects

Call or email to discover more about how I can help you improve your chances of gaining admission to your desired program.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Dave Bolick, Admissions Consultant

510-601-9554

This year, every leading Law, Medical, and Business school will process thousands of applications for only a few hundred available spots. Your admissions essays represent your final and best opportunity to persuade the committee that one of those coveted spots should be yours. Maximize this opportunity—contact me by phone or email to learn more.

Client Feedback

\"My medical school application essays look excellent. You preserved the originality of my ideas but presented them with far greater clarity. Thank you for your assistance.\" —Ganesh R.

\"Dave, thank you very much for the outstanding work on my MBA essays. You captured precisely what I intended to express and highlighted all the key points perfectly.\" —Jason H.